I got out of the car at the front of the church, A big, beautiful, well decorated church with a gothic touch to it. I was greeted by hundreds of smiling people in suits and dresses, i felt like the whole church was focused on me. My legs felt like jelly, i felt like i was about to pass out. I was not worried, I was anxious with excitement. Waiting for me inside was my beautiful soon to be wife, only a matter of minuets before i am a happy husband, i cant believe that this is happening. The doors open… I walk in and see all my family sitting down waiting for this happy event, i find my place at the alter… I wait… And wait… Then from out of the bright ray of sun shining through the doors, I see her.. My beautiful fiance, she’s beautiful, stunning in fact! She looks at me and smiles, i couldn’t be happier at this point of my life, she slowly walks up next to me while Blowing Bubbles is playing loudly on the old dusty church speakers, my stomach turning with anxiety, she finally arrives next to me, and says “‘Ello Del”.
Fellas wife dies and in the funeral and geeza comes up to him and says ello del
March 19, 2015 at 11:06 pm
The most important priorities here are:
1) Finish the piece
2) fix the minor spelling and capitalisation errors (The higher grades can’t be accessed if you start sentences with lower case letters or type i instead of I).
The content and ideas are great.
Currently: 14/40 – Band 6 – F2